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Daily Haiku — Jun 18, 2026

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An angel floated
Hiding away in her dreams
She felt safe here now

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📖 About this haiku

There's a lovely stillness at the center of this one — an angel, floating, hidden inside a dream. That word "hiding" does more work than it first appears to, because it turns what could be a soft, pretty image into something with a little ache underneath it. Safety here isn't found out in the world but tucked away from it, which gives the poem a quiet emotional undertow.

The mood leans dusky and interior, more midnight than any particular season, though there's a sense of retreat in it, like drawing curtains against something unnamed. The shift from "hiding" to "felt safe" is the real turn — fear and comfort sitting right next to each other without explanation.

What the compression achieves is restraint: no reason is given for the hiding, so the reader supplies their own weather. That's what rewards a second read — the poem trusts its own silence.

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