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Daily Haiku — Jun 10, 2026

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Goldfish crackers, yum
Boss crunches on those cheese thangs
no time to smile back

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📖 About this haiku

There's something delightful in how this haiku commits fully to its snack. Goldfish crackers get the reverent treatment usually reserved for cherry blossoms or autumn moons, and that mismatch is the whole engine of the poem. The turn lands in the final line, where "no time to smile back" pivots from crunchy contentment to something quieter and almost wistful — a small door opening onto distraction, or focus, or just the honest way snacking absorbs a creature completely.

The mood stays light, but that last line adds a flicker of loneliness that keeps it from being pure silliness. Compression does the real work here: three lines, no wasted motion, and yet you get texture (crunch), appetite (yum), and social nuance (the missed smile) all at once. Read it twice — the second pass, that missing smile lingers longer than the crackers do.

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