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Daily Haiku — Jul 17, 2026

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stepping in a field.
flowers everywhere; lovely.
acausality finds itself.

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📖 About this haiku

There's a lovely sleight of hand in how this haiku opens its hand fully, then closes it into a fist. The first two lines give you everything a haiku is supposed to give: a body moving through space, flowers everywhere, the simple exhale of "lovely." It's warm, sun-struck, almost naive in its contentment. Then the third line arrives like a locked door in a garden wall. Acausality finding itself doesn't explain the field, it destabilizes it retroactively, so that on a second read the flowers stop being scenery and start feeling like evidence of something that has no beginning, no chain of cause, just sudden bloom. The season-feeling stays soft, late spring maybe, but the mood curdles into wonder edged with vertigo. The compression works because it refuses to tell you which line is real. Both are.

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