If your story's overall narrator isn't just straight 3rd person and has personality, be sure to build them as a unique character with all the preparation required too.
A narrator with personality is making choices on every page—what to notice, what to skip, what tone to take—so readers are essentially spending hours with that voice whether or not it ever says "I." If that voice hasn't been built with the same care as your protagonist, it'll drift: wry in chapter one, solemn by chapter ten, for no reason the story earns. Treat it like character work. Ask what your narrator would find funny, what they'd linger on, what they'd rather not say directly, then keep that consistent across the whole book.
The caution: a narrator that constantly performs its own cleverness starts crowding out the story it's supposed to be telling. Personality should season the telling, not become the main event.
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